Written By: CowsinTrees
February 11, 2021
PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2021
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love this so much! the rhyme scheme is perfection :)
Nothing to say I just love it and can relate to it so well!
re: no problem! <3
re: thanks so much and no worries about late replies - I am very guilty of that too. Look forward to seeing more of your writing :D
I agree with Sophiascb -- this is so clever! I really look forward to reading more from you! :)
I love this, especially the repeated lines. Traintracks.. going south, so clever!
This is incredible! I absolutely love this!
Amazing work!!!!!!! Love this! <3
Re: you are welcome and congrats on Wednesday words too!
congrats on wednesday words!!!
Wow! This is amazing! I got my braces off a week ago, and my retainers in last night (they hurt!!) so I can relate on a spiritual level to this.
Congrats on Wednesday words!!
Congrats on Wednesday Words! It reminds me of a song called Braces by Jetta Juriansz ;) Awesome!
WOW!!!! I LOVE THIS!! As a girl who had braces for two years, this is really cool I feel like you described a girl who I met at the orthodontist actually Lol Love it! <33
This is incredible wow! Such a unique idea and the rhyme is flawless!
"By the time you know it's virtuous/Your thinness will be gone" -Love this line!!
Re: No problem, you too
Re: You're welcome!
So beautiful!! It reminds me of David Bowie's song "Life on Mars", especially the title. Great job and keep it up!
wow, okay, i love this. Congrats on Wednesday Words!
This is so great! I can't even describe it. And it's incredibly relatable to me(yay braces) Congrats on Wednesday Words! You deserve it. :)
this is amazing! congrats on wednesday words!
Oooh, this is really good. I like how it flows super well. Congrats!!
Wow, this is very good! I love the extended metaphor. Congrats!
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Fantastic poem, congratulations on Wednesday words and welcome to Write the World!
Thanks guys your comments are so kind! :)
I love this! Congrats on the pick and finalist!
Love this! Congrats on being a finalist <3 Gosh when I was younger I soo wanted to have braces, but I luckily never got them.
wonderful lyrics! congrats on being a finalist!!
100% agree with Parisienne! I love the rhymes in this song. Congrats on being a finalist!
This is amazing! Sums up being a teenager and having braces soooo well! <3
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