Ava Marie

Canada

Hi I'm Ava
15
She/Her

Aspiring Author
Dancer
Rock Climber

Always laughing
Beatlemaniac
Favourite book: The Book Thief by Markus Zusak
Bad jokes are the best!
I draw occasionally
I love constructive criticism!

Joined: 11/14/2020

Message to Readers

Edited!!! Please let me know what you think!!! I love your feedback.

Writers Block (edited)

February 23, 2021

PROMPT: The Drabble

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    The words seem to flow effortlessly from your fingertips; the almost overwhelming rush of ideas inside begging to become one with the empty space of your paper.
    Typing as fast as you can, stringing together a blissfully brilliant plot made up of the combination of letters and punctuation. There's character development, conflict, tastefully placed metaphors, everything you'd ever want in a story. 
Then it stops. The hourglass filled with all your grains of ideas slowly filter down the tunnel from your mind to your fingertips until there's nothing left. You stare at the page. 
    Maybe you'll have better luck tomorrow.
Thank you so much FastOceanLove for the review. Your advice was great and it definitely flows better now.  

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5 Comments
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_

    Thanks! It's super on point (without my review as well :D)


    3 months ago
  • serein

    i can't read this. It hurts too much.

    Ok lol I'll stop being dramatic but really this description of writer's block is ON POINT, and that's coming from an expert.


    3 months ago
  • Zirong

    I really love this piece! The descriptions are so vivid!

    re: thank you!


    3 months ago
  • BriRiley

    I love this! And it’s so true! I love how you put writers block into words! XD


    3 months ago
  • Sophiascb

    Felt that! I love the hourglass analogy. This is really good!


    3 months ago