superrloser

United States

17 yr old indie artist & trying my best. welcome to my brain! :)

Message to Readers

this is my original song and demo production!! I'm hoping to revisit it soon and release in october. if you have any feedback on the lyrics and production I'd love to hear it :))

aphrodite

February 9, 2021

https://youtu.be/TMRt21J5ntI

verse
prom queen dreams
in a too-small shell
used to being
a little bit unwell
I try to scream
but I don’t know how, so I ask

pre chorus
who else can I be instead
a different body with my

verse
head up high
just another girl
count down from five
bite my fingers raw
she’s just a child
and who am I to judge her

pre chorus
still, I wanna be the star
that’s falling where the flowers are, oh

chorus
dancing
down the line
aphrodite, are you listening
make me 
wanna be mine
aphrodite, would you kiss me
take me in your arms and tell
teach me how to love myself
make me
something divine
aphrodite

verse
big surprise
all my birthday guests
count down from five
but I’m underdressed
the world’s on fire
while I fix my hair, but baby

pre chorus
maybe I could learn from you
to be myself and pretty too, oh

chorus
dancing
down the line
aphrodite, are you listening
make me 
wanna be mine
aphrodite, would you kiss me
take me in your arms and tell
teach me how to love myself
make me
something divine
aphrodite, aphrodite

bridge
still, I wanna be the star
that’s shining where the wild things are, oh

chorus
dancing
down the line
aphrodite, are you listening
make me 
wanna be mine
aphrodite, would you kiss me
take me in your arms and tell
teach me how to love myself
make me
something divine
aphrodite, aphrodite

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10 Comments
  • BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)

    This is magical. It is catchy, has a great beat/tune, is sung so beautifully, the lyrics are enchanting, and the concept is spectacular!!! I adore your voice it is stunning. I am spellbound and would listen to and adore anything you produce, write or sing. You are so talented.


    about 2 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    This is so gorgeous! Your voice is really beautiful, especially when you hit those soprano notes. This is really lovely <3 Also..aphrodite...calliope hmmm :P Oh and you're so pretty!


    2 months ago
  • serotonin

    i love this. i love this so much.

    "still, I wanna be the star
    that’s falling where the flowers are, oh"

    "maybe I could learn from you
    to be myself and pretty too, oh"

    exquisite lyricism, i want more


    2 months ago
  • astrea

    wow your voice is so good! congrats on being a finalist!


    3 months ago
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_

    Omg your voice is just, wow! You're honestly the next freaking P!nk, if you don't know who that is she's like my favorite singer, I've been listening to her loads lately, feel free to translate that into your favorite singer though XD Welcome to Wtw! I'm Delphi and as useless :) said how to comment, feel free to check out some of my pieces as well, you're a great writer/artist for reals! :)


    3 months ago
  • useless :)

    together*


    3 months ago
  • useless :)

    i-
    your voice is incredible gosh. seriously tho, it is so freaking good. the lyrics are so relatable and come togethe beautifully...the whole song is just perfect. i wouldn't change a single thing, it's gorgeous.
    good luck in the competition!! :)
    (btw, just in case you decide to stick around after the comp, here's a tip! you can reply to someone's comment by going to their profiles, clicking on one of their pieces, and leaving a comment on their piece. most people decide to write "re:" in front of the reply. welcome to WtW!!)
    in case you haven't yet noticed, i'm a huge fan of ur work ;)


    3 months ago
  • jubileesong42

    Best one I've heard yet! <3 So much luck to you and your song.


    3 months ago
  • Madelyn (Carolina Girl)

    This is absolutely gorgeous and so unique. Welcome to WTW new friend. I can not wait to see more of your work.


    3 months ago
  • your local cryptid {on hiatus}

    I love this so much! the lyrics are so hauntingly relatable, and mixed with your amazing voice and instrumentals, this is literally perfect!


    3 months ago