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XXFJ, Melancholic-Sanguine, ambivert
I edited the chorus and verse 1.5 a bit, added a second half to verse 2, added a two-part final chorus, wrote a bridge, and removed the original bridge-thing I had.
Should I change the chorus back to the first version?
What do you guys think of the two-part chorus at the end?
I'm not entirely satisfied with the bridge. Do you guys think it should go in a different direction (and which one)?
And finally, should I keep the segment labels (verse 1, bridge, etc) in or delete them?
Written By: Anne Blackwood
February 12, 2021