Lmk what you think! Are the lyrics... alright, i suppose? (my brother went ew at sweaty palms but I was reluctant to take it out) Does the "storyline" make some sense?
Written By: amaryllis
February 9, 2021
PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2021
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Re: Haha no. I think that was one of the biggest problems is I had no sense of rhythm or melody while is was writing the lyrics. I am pretty much completely tone deaf, so I don't know what I was thinking. I will probably just end up submitting a poem for the comp and hope I can pass it off as lyrics. lol.
Madelyn (Carolina Girl)
I really like this. It is gorgeous. Hello new friend :)
Re: thank you so much for your comment and your brilliant suggestions. I love your idea for accentuating the musical motif. Also, how in the world did you write such an amazing song!!!?
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