Ava Marie

Canada

Hi I'm Ava
15
She/Her

Aspiring Author
Dancer
Rock Climber

Always laughing
Beatlemaniac
Favourite book: The Book Thief by Markus Zusak
Bad jokes are the best!
I draw occasionally
I love constructive criticism!

Joined: 11/14/2020

Message from Writer

~Aspire to inspire~
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Go check out my amazing real-life little sister Peyton Feltham, and real-life friend kebivy!!!
Also, my very talented WtW friends Rival, SamRose, and BizzleWrites!!
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"Though my soul may set in darkness,
it will rise in perfect light;
I have loved the stars
too fondly to be fearful
of the night."
-Sarah Williams
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"You have to be odd to be number one."
-Dr. Seuss
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"He said:
Don't you feel lonely living in your own little world?
She whispered:
Don't you feel powerless living in other people's worlds?"
-F.G.
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"I am under no obligation to make sense to you."
-Unknown
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"Tell the truth and make it rhyme."
-John Lennon

Last Moments

February 8, 2021

PROMPT: 25 Words

6
A tear rolled down her cheek; softly, silently, steadily.
This was the end.
Her lungs shook as she inhaled one last breath.
She was gone.
I fixed up the title, and I like it way more now. 

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6 Comments
  • Ellington Stone

    Omg this is so sad. But its also clear and to the point. I love so much!! Perfect use of the prompt, for sure.


    about 2 months ago
  • Ellington Stone

    Omg this is so sad. But its also clear and to the point. I love so much!! Perfect use of the prompt, for sure.


    about 2 months ago
  • Abrianna

    Wow this is so touchingly sad.
    Re: Thanks so much, I wrote it about a personal experience so it really means a lot when people understand what I was saying.
    Also I love all your quotes! And if you like reading about the Holocaust you should read The Hiding Place by Corrie Ten Boom. Unless you have already?


    about 2 months ago
  • Jasmine khawar

    Curiousity is filled up in my heart after reading this!! So sad, and simply written.

    (Idk why your name reminds me of Ava Max XD)


    3 months ago
  • ✧♬TwinklingLights♬✧

    holy crap, this made me so sad but in the best way


    3 months ago
  • Madelyn (Carolina Girl)

    I love this.


    3 months ago