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This song really aligns with me. I definitely agree with the authors point of view and it was nice to hear someone say something.
The line that really stood out to me was “Never felt so alone. A call would have been nice but it’s better than dying in a hospital room by myself.” This is definitely something I have felt before. It was nice to see that I wasn’t alone.
I think the writer could add a little more to her bridge. I feel like there is real potential to make it a big, showstopper in the song.
This song I so good! I love the lyrics and the flow of it. It’s very relatable and I love how you don’t hold back. You say what needs to be said.
Maybe fix some of your formatting. There are some things which I think could be switched around, added to or changed to help with flow. Check my comments for more detail.