Written By: eliza rhinelander
March 2, 2021
PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2021
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Congratulations, this is such a beautiful song!
No worries! There actually isn't a way to reply directly on the site; you have to go to each person's piece and comment "Re:" and your reply so they get a notification. But I don't think anyone expects you to reply to 25 comments that likely flooded your notifications. I'm excited for the YouTube version! I'm actually writing a poetry series rn, and both of the pieces I have so far were written with your song playing in the background. And you're welcome! Lol.
hi! i'm so sorry i haven't replied, the website has been glitching for me, but i just wanted to say that all these comments are so kind and generous, thank you so much! i'm working on a version to put on youtube so hopefully that won't take much longer, i'm honestly just astounded at the amount of positive feedback i've gotten. from the bottom of my heart, thank you!
just amazing. I loved it. congratulations and I'm excited to hear more of your songs!!!
congratulations!! this deserves a win :) wonderful song!
Congrats! This is so beautiful!
Ohh this is beautiful wow. I love the lines "i pity those who'll never see/her face or hear her poetry" And your voice is lovely! Congrats! :)
I.........no I can't do this anymore. WHY ARE YOU SO TALENTED? I'm getting Mandy Moore/Taylor Swift/Shawn Mendes vibes all mixed up in like the best way! Your voice is...it's simply stunning. The lyrics, and guitar...just....wow. Congratulations; it's a well deserved win!
put this on Spotify i need to listen to it every day for the rest of my LIFE it is AMAZING
me who hyperfixated on Greek mythology in fifth grade: *tearing up* beAuTiFuL
I LOVE IT SO MUCH
Ahhhhh yess I’m so glad that you won! I have loved this piece from the first time I read it, and you totally deserve the win. Congratulations!
Incredibly written -- congratulations!! And your voice is so beautiful! You totally deserved it :)
congrats!!! super well deserved
WOW. you did amazingly on this, seriously deserve it. congrats!!!!!
Okay but I can't stop listening to this! I need it on Spotify!
Wow I feel like I could listen to this song forever. Your voice is so perfectly sweet, almost unassuming, and you deliver the lyrics in a way that just brings them to life.
Congratulations!!! This is awesome!
congrats u lations!
congratulation!! the lyrics are truly awesome and you have a lovely voice!
WOW. CONGRATULATIONS! I love the theme woven throughout this.
great job! the poetry and rhythm is on point! congratulations!!
This is wonderful. The emotion you've put into it makes the song come alive, and the lyrics are just so poetic. Congratulations on the well-deserved win!!!
Your lyrics and performance were just stunning. It honestly sounded like something I'd listen to come up on the radio or something. The way you sung it brought the words and story behind the words to life in such a beautiful way and I cannot tell you how much my heart sighed when listening and reading this. Lovely work!
I just listened to your recording and I love it. I'll leave a peer review soon. :)
Oh my, I just listened to your performance and it is breathtaking. Your voice is utterly beautiful (seriously, it sounded professional) and the guitar just worked perfectly. And the lyrics are amazing too!! The rhymes are really clever. I think you stand a serious chance at winning this comp...
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