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Longing

February 20, 2021

PROMPT: 25 Words

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When it comes to you, I'm filled with Saudade*, because every time I reach out, my fingers slip right through you.
Saudade: A nostalgic longing to be near again to someone or something that's distant. 

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8 Comments
  • Livsnjutare

    Wow, this is the second new word I learned today! This is such a sad piece, you wrote it beautifully!
    Great job!
    love,
    kitten


    3 months ago
  • Love, Rose

    nice nice nice i love new words

    Re: thanks bro for your comment


    3 months ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    A NEW WORD!!!!!! i LOVE learning interesting words like this. and it really spoke for the whole piece in its longing. the simplicity of 25 words is incredible. "my fingers slip right through you" ahhh


    3 months ago
  • Booklover12

    Wow! So many emotions in so few words, amazing!


    3 months ago
  • The Ravenclaw Dragon

    This is really good. The shortness really intensifies the meaning of this. I liked your addition of "Saudade". Keep on writing!


    3 months ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    woah, this feels so intense... :o


    3 months ago
  • psithurism

    re: Aww thanks!


    3 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Love this!


    3 months ago