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Child of God
Rider of the Rohirrim
District 12

Message from Writer

"And even when you think you're finished, it's not over yet," for KING & COUNTRY, "It's not Over yet"
"All of my dirt, all of my shame drowned in the streams that've made me born again," Jordan Feliz, "The River."
"Scars come with livin,' you are not alone," TobyMac, "Scars (Come With Livin')"
"I might bend but I won't break, I'll fight the elements," TobyMac "The Elements."
"Stand tall but above it all, fix my eyes on You," for KING & COUNTRY, "Fix My Eyes"
"Run wild, live free, love strong, you and me," for KING & COUNTRY "Run Wild."
"One by one we will call for a ceasefire...one by one, reaching out to our enemies" for KING & COUNTRY, "Ceasefire."
Currently reading Dubliners by James Joyce

Only You

February 1, 2021

Verse 1

I could go from the mountains to the sea
I could run from the people plaguing me
But I can't run from your everlasting love
I can't run from my Father up above.

Verse 2

I am surrounded by the slaying words of hate
I am surrounded by people cruel and irate
But I am surrounded by a God who sees all
I am surrounded by a love that will never fall


Only you, Father
Only you, Daddy
Only you can dry my tears
Only you destroy my fears
Only you, Father
Only you, Daddy
Only you can take my pain
Only you bring sun through rain

Only you

Verse 3

I do not speak because they do not hear
I stay silent, trapped by the fear
But Father, you listen and you speak
Father, you hold me when my soul is weak

Verse 4

I could fall from this heavy load
I could stumble at end of road
But you support me and hold me high
You hear my every desperate cry


Because every day
Only you see me, Father
You won't go away
You're always beside me, Father
And when I'm all alone
You carry me home
Only you
Only you, O father

Yup, this breaks every rule of song and rhythm but it is what it is. Probably not even gonna submit it anyway. 


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  • Ellington Stone

    It's evident that you're very connected to your faith! This was fun to read!

    about 2 months ago
  • Lata.B

    Re- Umm I wanna say it's dystopian but like idk but yes it is dystopian

    3 months ago
  • Madelyn (Carolina Girl)

    I love this so much. Hello friend I love your work. This song for some reason reminds me of Truth be told by matthew west. If you have not heard it I totally recommend.

    3 months ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    wdym it breaks rhythm and rhyme?? this is incredible!

    3 months ago
  • AstroWriter

    I love the rhythm ad the rhyme! DEFINETELY submit!

    3 months ago
  • The Ravenclaw Dragon

    Wow. This is really amazing and sweet. And for your "rhythm rule-breaking" you could create a new type of music- one that for each line it has a different rhythm! Keep on writing!

    3 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood


    3 months ago
  • Lata.B

    You should submit!! This is so good! I wonder how you can make the rhyming so perfect because I find it so hard!

    3 months ago