Rival

United States

16
loves, dogs, music, and Writing
i am a self made songwriter and poet
i am a very stubborn person and i will stand up for what i believe no matter WHO fucking challenges me
and if you don't like me deal with it
i am my own biggest RIVAL

Message from Writer

"When you're happy you enjoy the music, but when you're sad you understand the lyrics"
-Nate Feuerstein AKA NF
"You are a product of your choices, not a victim of your circumstances"
Marshall Bruce Mathers III AKA eminem/ Slim Shady

Story of a Shattered Heart By:Rival

February 11, 2021

(Pre-Chorus)
yeah
it's like i speak
and no-one ever listens
so here's what i need to say
and maybe it's what someone else needs to hear
(Chorus)
if I told you that I need you here with me
you'd try to share my pain and my misery 
your my future and my biggest victory
(Verse-1)
on the day we first day I saw you I knew
that you was the one for me so I went after you
and looking back on it now I see that if I hadn't tried to pursue 
I never would heard that " I love you too"
(Chorus)
if I told you that I need you here with me
you'd try to share my pain and my misery 
your my future and my biggest victory
(Verse-2)
But when you tell me you love me
its almost too good to be true
you can call me pessimistic
but if you was me you'd probably lie to you too
im stuck in the loop 
between loving and hurting its true
but i pray everyday that we just make it through
(Chorus)
if I told you that I need you here with me
you'd try to share my pain and my misery 
your my future and my biggest victory
(verse 3)
now flash to the day we ended
the hurt I caused baby was never intended
but we've put too much in this 
to just sit here pretending
like we don't sit in our kitchen reminiscing and wishing that things could be different
but how am I supposed to say goodbye
to the only girl that I want for the rest of my life
(verse 4)
you want me to give up?
and say I don't care
do you want me to look at us and pretend that love was never there
that's not fair
but who am I to judge
its obvious I wasn't enough
I guess I just wasn't sharp enough to make the cut
you know i need you girl 
so I'm writing my feelings raw and uncut

 

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7 Comments
  • nolongeractive

    I love this!! It is such an interesting title and concept and I read it like five times! It is so magical and really moved me; you have so much talent. This is way better than some of my songs!!


    25 days ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    wow. felt visceral, raw, and intense. how do you imagine it sounding? are you submitting a recording?


    3 months ago
  • ~wildflower~

    Re: oh wow, thank you so much. I don’t even know what to say! Just thank you, thank you, thank you


    3 months ago
  • ~Zoe N~

    wow, I love this! Absolutely Beautiful!


    3 months ago
  • nolongeractive

    This is amazing!!


    3 months ago
  • The Inky Writer

    Stunningly raw and so powerful! :)


    3 months ago
  • Nikki

    Re: aww thank you! and you are a beautiful soul who leaves the sweetest comments on pieces making the writer feeling very important!


    3 months ago