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I can feel the loneliness and sadness from the lyrics. This song broke my heart.
The whole verse 2 is my favourite! It's very well-crafted and the rhymes are great :)
Hmm actually I wish this song could be longer. Maybe you can add one or two section(s) to make it even richer?
I really like this song! Any melody ideas?