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Message to Readers
minor edits and fixes
see footnotes, i put the good stuff there
still in need of technical and musical advice!!! song parts, musical arrangements?! HELP
This is a song about how words speak to the writer. I feel inspired to now listen to what my books are telling me.
"I hear whispers of inspiration from letters on the page". This is really inspiring, and I feel like it is true for so many people (including me).
Maybe shorten the bridge a bit? I still believe, though, that it's pretty good the way it is.
This is amazing! I loved the story inside it and all I can further say is that it's amazing. Great job!
Do you think you review my songwriting piece? I understand if you don't. And good luck in the competition!