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Message to Readers
minor edits and fixes
see footnotes, i put the good stuff there
still in need of technical and musical advice!!! song parts, musical arrangements?! HELP
I think this song is about how different experiences, people, and places shape us in ways that impact both how we act and how we perceive the actions of others. This song is about self-discovery in a time where everything is connected.
The last part of the bridge as well as the chorus really resonate with me... connecting the themes of the song in both a literal way (the actual lyrics point out how words and people can change us) and figurative way (they are the backbones of the song-- the framework for the verses). The chorus is also really catchy, which is a great attribute in a song!
I think this is a great first draft, but everything felt a little too broad to me. You didn't really dive deep into the particular truth you were searching for (verse 1) or into the person that loves you (verse 2). More details would add so much. It also helps to choose a point in your own life where you experienced some of these same emotions or experiences.
You've got a great start! I love the theme of this song and I can't wait to see how you expand and change it, drawing from your own memories to guide you.
I've never analyzed a song so closely! Tell me, what is this song about to you? A song means something different to every listener (or, in this case, reader) and I was wondering how you got this idea. Wonderful work as always! Keep writing!