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this is def not final, so any feedback is appreciated. technical, lyrical, musical, etc. i have a vague melody for this, similar to Taylor Swift's "Dress" (i know, i know, i don't like to listen to it much because it's... intense, but this song has a similar vibe to it—just way more mild and toned down).
I think this piece is really lovely and even though it's rather short, I definitely enjoyed reading it! ^-^
I would love to know why you chose this specific title. It's a pretty fitting title, but I feel like "I ache for you" would be a better one. It's your decision, lol, I'm just a little partial to it because it sounds more romantic. XD
I think this is a lovely song and I'm a little curious about what inspired you to write it. Anything specific?
You really have a talent for writing songs. Can't wait to read more! <3