anemoia (#words)

United States

WtW's resident "the cool cousin you see once a year, but the conversation you guys were having a long time ago picks up where it left off without missing a beat" (says rosi willard)

Child of God
logophile
volleyballer

Female

Message to Readers

see footnotes
reviews appreciated, this is in preliminary stages

All the Ways

January 31, 2021

FREE WRITING

4

[VERSE 1]
Heart pounds
Breath quickens
Thoughts tangle
And you're not even in the room

[VERSE 2]
Head spins
Body tingles
Focus blurs
And you're not even in the room

‚Äč[CHORUS]
You don't know you do this to me 
You don't see the secrets I keep
You don't know all the ways I ache

[VERSE 3]
Pulse jumps
Hands shake
Passion quakes
And you're not even in the room

[CHORUS]
I don't understand how much I want you
I don't know what I want to do
I afraid of all the ways I ache for you

[BRIDGE]
Anticipation waits
Desire awakes
Soul aches
For you

[CHORUS]
You don't know you do this to me 
You don't see the secrets I keep
You don't know all the ways I ache
I don't understand how much I want you
I don't know what I want to do
I'm afraid of all the ways I ache for you

[OUTRO]
And all I can do
Is fight these feelings 
These little fires you've started in me
I'm afraid 
Of all the ways
I ache for you
A rough draft of what this might look like as song lyrics.
Added to and edited.
Apologies if I don't reply.

wow, why does that all sounds so serious? 
it's the periods. punctuation matters! XD

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4 Comments
  • Stone of Jade

    first love this!
    second (re): oh my word that is so sweet! I know exactly what you mean. just being able to spend some time with CL must have been so nice!! i am so happy for you!!!
    third (re): you and anne were the only ones who got it. My teacher didn't even pick up on it *facepalm* (and i went to a christian school). It made me so so happy to see you kind of understood it! im glad at least *someone* got it XD


    3 months ago
  • Zirong

    ooo l can't wait to listen to the song already :D any melody ideas?

    re: XD I feel so happy that you want to know more about me haha~ maybe we can chat more in the comments? Also, for the TEDx talk there will be a selection. I can't say for sure I'll get in but I'm more than ready to give my best! I'm working hard on my memoir as well! I'll let you know if I ever publish it on this site :D


    3 months ago
  • ~Aurora~

    This is great. I love the way it flows and has a beautiful message too!! This is awesome, especially for a first draft. I can hear someone singing it too. I ESPECIALLY like the ending its so bomb


    3 months ago
  • Nikki

    yay! awesome first drafttt :)


    3 months ago