anemoia (#words)

United States

WtW's resident "the cool cousin you see once a year, but the conversation you guys were having a long time ago picks up where it left off without missing a beat" (says rosi willard)

Child of God
logophile
volleyballer

Female

Message to Readers

vulnerability is a scary thing
but sleeping at last never fails to soothe me
listen to the great conjunction

All the Ways

January 30, 2021

FREE WRITING

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Heart pounds
Breath quickens
Thoughts tangle
And you're not even in the room

Head spins
Body tingles
Focus blurs
And you're not even in the room

Pulse jumps
Hands shake
Passion quakes
And you're not even in the room

Anticipation waits
Desire awakes
Soul aches
For you

You don't know you do this to me 
You don't see the secrets I keep
You don't know all the ways I ache

I don't understand how much I want you
I don't know what I want to do
I don't like all the ways I ache for you
Will probably become a song.

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8 Comments
  • remi'sgotinkstains

    love this poem! i love those poems where it describes what your body is doing . . . well done!
    re: aww thanks! and thanks for the follow!


    3 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: The Scholastics Art and Writing competition is a huge competition for youth in the US. People compete on a regional level for gold and silver keys, and gold keys are judged on a national level.
    Here's their website.
    https://www.artandwriting.org/
    You should totally enter next year if you're interested.


    3 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    oh gosh this is amazing. /You don't know all the ways I ache/ that hit hard...so so well written.


    3 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    Chapter 28 for T&R is out!!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/215632/version/449042


    3 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Gah this is a mood nice job


    3 months ago
  • xx carolina xx

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/215518/version/448664


    3 months ago
  • Zirong

    Wow this will be a beautifully sad song.


    3 months ago
  • happygiggles

    This is amazing! I really love the repetition, it fits the poem well! Also, you should totally make this a song, I'd love to hear it! <3


    3 months ago