FantasyOtter12

United States

He/him
ISFJ-T
Scorpio
Love dystopian fiction!
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Bookworm
Abnegation
*Est. 7/6/20*
OtterFAMMM
Phlegmatic-Sanguine

Message to Readers

Been kinda inactive...Might enter the songwriting competition if all I have to write is lyrics, so there's that. ill catch up on everyones amazing work soon.. I think. (Fingers crossed) Hope y'all are great :)

Crashing, burning, pounding.

January 29, 2021

FREE WRITING

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Anguish gushes out of my chest like the waves pounding, demanding I let them out.

Sorrow tinges my thoughts, tears form behind my heavy eyelids.

It can't stop, won't stop, but I refuse to let it pass.

I don't know what to say, what to do, the backlash gets the best of me,

I walk away.
I seriously have no idea what this is. 

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12 Comments
  • anemoia (#words)

    re: thank you. it means a lot!


    3 months ago
  • remi'sgotinkstains

    re: aw thanks! that was my favorite sentence too


    3 months ago
  • happygiggles

    re- Thanks for the water lol * clinks glass *


    3 months ago
  • happygiggles

    Interesting. I like it. I like it a lot. The first line is beautiful. (:


    3 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    Chapter 28 for T&R is out!!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/215632/version/449042


    3 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Woooooow. This. Is. Incredible!!!


    3 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    replying:thank you so much,fo!<3


    3 months ago
  • beth r.

    i really like this- it's like, elegantly hard-hitting if that makes sense.
    re: aw thanks :)


    3 months ago
  • Cosmogyral

    re: huehuehue *rapidly blink eyelashes unblinkingly* call me caleb good sir


    3 months ago
  • Love, Rose

    wow this is stunning - well done


    3 months ago
  • Shivona

    This is pretty, I can feel what you feel through this, it's so complex but beautiful at the same time! Well done on this :)
    PS thanks for the comment on my piece, it means so much! so kind


    3 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Praying you feel more invigorated soon. Don't worry about catching up on everything you missed; take care of yourself if you need a break.


    3 months ago