AJ - Izzy

Canada

How to write all of me in less than 10 seconds?

Hmm, let me think... how about DREAMER?

Yup. That works.

Message to Readers

<3

dancing in the moonlight

January 31, 2021

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Hey... let's dance. 

Aw man, I- I don't know. 

C'mon! It'll be fun.

I kinda have two left feet... 

Pleeease? 
Maybe you just need a partner. 
Here. 
Take my hand. 


Alright... if you insist. 

Okay, let's do this. 

Why am I so nervous?

Aw, don't be nervous. 
Just put your hand here, on my hip.
Like this, see?

And now, offer me your other hand. 

Offer, like, "here hold my hand"?

*laughing* YES, like holding hands. 

*blushes*

I'm just going to place mine gently in yours. 
Now we're going to take a step. 
Just follow my footsteps. 
One, and then two. 
One, then two. 


I'm gonna trip, woah. 

Don't worry, I got you. 
Don't look at your feet. 
Look up at me. 
Keep your eyes on mine. 


Okay... okay. 
Eyes on you. 
My eyes are always on you. 

I MEAN, not in a creepy way!!

*laughs*

You- you know what I mean. 

*smiling* Yeah, I know. 

You're beautiful... you always are. 
That's why. 
I can't help but think I'm the luckiest guy in the world. 


*blushes* Really?
Well, that means I must be the luckiest girl in the world. 


*grins*

Hey, look at you!
You're dancing!


I- I am?
I am!


You sure are!
Now, just feel the music. 


What music?

​The music of... us. 

That is so cheesy. 
I love it. 


Why thank you. 
... 


What's wrong?

Oh no, nothing's wrong. 
I'm just... really happy right now. 
Here. 
With you. 
You make me really happy. 


Yeah?

Yes! 
Of course. 


Well, when you're happy, I'm happy. 
And when I'm happy, you're happy. 
We're just really happy, I guess!


We sure are. 
Woah!
Spinning me now, are we?

I'm getting into it!
Dancing is fun. 


It is. 
I knew you'd enjoy it. 


I enjoy everything about this moment. 
This life, even. 

*smiles* Exciting and, even a little dangerous.

I'm a dangerous girl. 

That's very true. 
My world is all the more better for it. 

Let's wrap up this dance, shall we? 

I can do that... can I lead?

After you, my good sir. 

Hope you don't mind a few more spins, my lady. 

*laughs* I don't mind at all. 
Spin the night away. 






 
Inspired by the song Dancing in the Moonlight by King Harvest.  

My mind is screaming with how cheesy this is. 
Apologies :)

Hope you're all having a splendid day!! <3

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16 Comments
  • Livsnjutare

    This is so beautiful!!! Great job!!


    6 months ago
  • Sunflower~

    I love this! So wholesome and sweet and beautiful! ;)


    6 months ago
  • happygiggles (not as active anymore)

    This is so sweet! My cheesy self can't stop smiling, my heart is gonna explode!! ((:

    Also, elite song choice, perfection. IMMACULATE. :PPP


    6 months ago
  • katnissromanoff

    I loved this so much!!! It's so realistic and cute!! Wonderful job :):)


    6 months ago
  • Jasmin khawar

    Awwww!! this is the cutest thing I've seen (read) today!! beautiful


    6 months ago
  • Lata.B

    This is soooooo fricken cute bro I even blushed haha i loved this!!


    6 months ago
  • Zirong

    This is so creative and sweet! I can imagine the scene!


    6 months ago
  • astrea

    i kinda llike the cheesiness, aw this is so sweet!
    <3


    6 months ago
  • | rosi willard |

    THIS IS SO CHEESY AND SWEET, OH MY GOD.

    re: thanks for your kind words.


    6 months ago
  • Anna_19

    it's beautiful, good job! Keep writing!


    6 months ago
  • useless :)

    re: aw thank you and np! :)
    and yes hehe lol


    6 months ago
  • useless :)

    the cheesiness in this is gold XD. it's so sweet tho :)


    6 months ago
  • remi'sgotinkstains

    re: thanks so much! and yes, a poem is everything quiet and promising!


    6 months ago
  • anonymous_123 [Child of God]

    Aww so sweet I loved this. I’m going to be honest I thought that the bold words was a girl and the italic a girl. I feel like it would have been so much cuter the other way because you never really have guys or men no offense who want to dance with you. I loved this either way. It made me smile and picture it like a cute romance movie:)


    6 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    THE CHEESINESS WARMS MY SOUL

    *sparkly eyes*


    6 months ago
  • remi'sgotinkstains

    this is so funny . . . and really cheesy . . . but i think it's hilarious! hehe ;)


    6 months ago