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The feeling this poem gave me was effortless and so simply worded. In a world wrecked by turmoil, sometimes you need stability, and I believe this poem embodies this. The ending is beautiful and reminds me of my own experiences with snow, which is what every great poem does; it triggers memories.
The first stanza, about the cold being my friend could be elaborated upon, and I wish I had more insight into these feelings, but I appreciate the ambiguity. All this aside, additional details aren’t necessary, as I adore this poem for its simplicity and honest feeling that it has.
I can’t wait to see what you’ll write next, your poetry is honest and I believe you’ve found a way to speak your truth through it. Great work!