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this was really relatable and the words you used to describe having a crush are so true. i think the title also adds a lot-- taking back your words and having control over your feelings again.
i think this is a short poem that has just enough mystery to be interesting but also enough transparency to see what's happening here. i think other than changing the word choice, this is great. maybe some more imagery, that would add a lot.
i'm so sorry it took so long for me to do this review and i know it's not the best review ever. ahhhhh life is a lot right now and i wish i could do your beautiful writing more justice. have a great day and i look forward to seeing how you'll change this if you keep drafting.