psithurism #words [Sunnydew]

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She/her | ENFJ-T | Christian
Violist | Nemophilist
Joined October 21st 2020
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psithurism: The sound of wind in
the trees and the rustling of leaves

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Golden Slumbers

January 21, 2021

FREE WRITING

12

sing me a lullaby and tuck me in at night
remind me not to let the bedbugs bite
let the dreamy golden haze fill up my eyes
call me pretty darling and hum away my cries
flick the switch and send me drifting away
wake me with your smiles to start my new day
call me home, don't let me exit through the door
i'm not ready to let go, i just need a little more
Inspired by Golden Slumbers by The Beatles

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10 Comments
  • Charisse Marison

    YESSSS I LOVE THE BEATLES! I've always been a softie for Paul :)
    Ok, forget about that, let's talk about HOW GORGEOUS AND POETIC AND WELL WRITTEN THIS WAS! You are SO talented and I can't wait to read more of your work!


    about 1 month ago
  • beth r.

    lovely, gentle- ugh i love the beatles


    about 1 month ago
  • Paisley Blue

    well hello there


    about 1 month ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: It's okay bb I'm over it now


    about 1 month ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Right?? I'm like um sorry to break it you, subconscious, but I do not like Jason that way??


    about 1 month ago
  • Cosmogyral

    re: oh, yeah, that was on 27. I don't think I ended up correcting that comment, but encouraging it because in this collection it was always me, the narrator, the wanderer, the crier, and the psychopath. The only individual traits of each persona were why we all had not coexisted, yet were immortalized in seperate traits.


    about 1 month ago
  • almost flora kane

    how i wish i could live in this world. golden slumbers is such an inviting phrase too, i need to go listen to the song:) this piece is lovely.


    about 1 month ago
  • ReaganGrace

    Oh wow... this is breath taking!


    about 1 month ago
  • Dmoral

    "Little darling, it seems like years since it's been here / Here comes the sun"


    about 1 month ago
  • Paisley Blue

    oh kiwi, this is brilliant!!! wow!!! the rhyming is simple and yet so, so perfect, and your wording is wonderful!!! :D wow... :)


    about 1 month ago