AstroWriter

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OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR 140+ FOLLOWERS!!! Your one follow means a lot for me and I really appreciate. One follow, one new friend. On our road to 200! (lol)

Working on two novels!
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Percy Jackson
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Maze Runners

"A reader lives a hundred lives before dying"-?
"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched. They must be felt by heart" - Helen Keller
"You don't know what you got till you lose it"-Some Smart Person

The Storm in the World

February 23, 2021

FREE WRITING

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I can see it in your eye
A shiney sad glimmer
Don't you dare cry
I can feel it coming

I'll hold the bucket
When the tear comes out
I'll take it out in the drain
Won't listen to your shout

Make a fire in the rain
Cause that's what we do
Don't you take the pain
Squeeze it out

Your words flutter in the wind
I see one of them sad and sulking
My hand takes hold of them
Crushing it to nothing

This is the world we live in
Filled with hate and sadness
Love will always win
Or I will come

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18 Comments
  • nolongeractive

    Re: I have!! It has been two years, I can't wait for you all to check them out! Definitely tell your friends, if they're interested!


    7 months ago
  • nolongeractive

    Re: Thank you soooooo much!!!


    7 months ago
  • Harzi

    Oh my gosh, I love this! This stirs emotions in me, and it gets stronger the more I read. I can't stop rereading ahh!

    Also (late) replying: Aww, thank you so much! It's comforting and wonderful to hear that! Sending you love <3


    8 months ago
  • Emi

    "Make a fire in the rain" is definitely my favorite line. This is so beautiful and touching—great work!


    8 months ago
  • Love, Rose

    wow this is stunning - well done


    8 months ago
  • Madelyn (Carolina Girl)

    This is so pretty. Also I am glad you like my series life as a secret. I will be reposting what I have so far and will finish it soon. I hope you like it :)


    8 months ago
  • Lata.B

    This is amazing!
    Oh gosh, Thank you so much! Can I review any thing for you? OMG!! That reminds me I gotta read your first chapter! Ahh I promise to read that when I get the chance!


    8 months ago
  • Toikupu~est

    Yes, the bit about crushing sulking words, like petrol-soaked paper I would imagine, is really gripping!


    8 months ago
  • Starlitskies

    Wonderful! This is charged with so much emotion!
    "Make a fire in the rain" - this line is stunning!
    "Love will always win
    Or I will come" - and the declaration here makes for such an amazing ending!
    Re: Thank you for your comment on my piece and for all the likes!!!! <3 And yes, twinzies! It's wonderful isn't it. My bullet journal is the sole thing that keeps me from descending into chaos haha :)


    8 months ago
  • Ren(hiatus)

    WOAH OMG! WOAH! I just needed this so much thanks dude


    8 months ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    OMCCC!! CONGRATSSS ASTRO!! ON 50 FOLLOWERSSS!! I JUST SAW IT BUT YAYAYAY!!!!!!! CON-GRAT-U-LATIONS!!!!


    8 months ago
  • Yellow Sweater

    Re: Also the "mais je suis chrétienne" life refers to the fact the French Catholicism is stereo-typically thought of as superficial.


    8 months ago
  • Yellow Sweater

    Re: thank you so much for all your kind comments. It really means a lot. As for your question about what inspired me to write Stomach Ache, I have been struggling with my spirituality lately. I am not religious, but I think religions are beautiful, if that makes sense? I romanticize Christianity, but I could never believe in it.


    8 months ago
  • ~Zoe~

    re: YAYAYA!! :)


    8 months ago
  • nopenopenope

    re:..uh..okay??


    8 months ago
  • nopenopenope

    re:..yes?


    8 months ago
  • Jj101

    Wow just wow! This is amazing! I love the rhyming too:)


    8 months ago
  • thea_ivy

    I really love this<3


    8 months ago