Cosmogyral

United States

and i am tired,
so very tired.

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

January 16, 2021

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LXXXIII. i wanna go where the constellations go

-adventure.

Would you share with me your imagery?


 
at last, a one-liner
 this reminds me of the original draft of fifteen (XV), where a body lazed through the sky and dragged its hand through the parting constellations of stars, yet this one has long since evolved from the original. i want to walk across the dam grass and clumped dirt at 2 am while the moon casts over watching me, and i'll just keep walking, forever at 2 am on a night in early april, i'd just like to keep walking.

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7 Comments
  • Minvra

    Re: So it's like "hot potato"?


    about 1 month ago
  • Minvra

    "And what's stopping you?" Is my first thought.


    about 1 month ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    This is a piece of poetic gold! It’s enchanting, and the imagery is so phenomenal even from a single line! Wowow!


    about 1 month ago
  • AstroWriter

    king baby!


    about 1 month ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Yes! Thank you! Ooh that mashup sounds awesome I gotta go listen to it now.


    about 1 month ago
  • bunnybeige

    Simple, yet brilliant.
    You're a master of your craft, bro.


    about 1 month ago
  • Zinniav

    This is utterly brilliant. I think it might be my favorite yet! It's the blue hour where I live and this makes me want to run out into the street, chasing the vanished constellations


    about 1 month ago