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LXXXIII. i wanna go where the constellations go
-adventure.
Would you share with me your imagery?
Footnotes
at last, a one-liner
this reminds me of the original draft of fifteen (XV), where a body lazed through the sky and dragged its hand through the parting constellations of stars, yet this one has long since evolved from the original. i want to walk across the dam grass and clumped dirt at 2 am while the moon casts over watching me, and i'll just keep walking, forever at 2 am on a night in early april, i'd just like to keep walking.
This is utterly brilliant. I think it might be my favorite yet! It's the blue hour where I live and this makes me want to run out into the street, chasing the vanished constellations
7 Comments
Minvra
Re: So it's like "hot potato"?
Minvra
"And what's stopping you?" Is my first thought.
Rohan’s Defender
This is a piece of poetic gold! It’s enchanting, and the imagery is so phenomenal even from a single line! Wowow!
AstroWriter
king baby!
Anne Blackwood
Re: Yes! Thank you! Ooh that mashup sounds awesome I gotta go listen to it now.
bunnybeige
Simple, yet brilliant.
You're a master of your craft, bro.
Zinniav
This is utterly brilliant. I think it might be my favorite yet! It's the blue hour where I live and this makes me want to run out into the street, chasing the vanished constellations