Cosmogyral

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i never wanted aottsisfts to be romantic

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

January 12, 2021

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LXXIX. 'the stars have written your destiny',
what a common misconception.
           to be the mast to your stars,
is to let them guide you,
but do not allow them to be the wind that fills the sails
            they are not there to lead you.


What did you think when you read that? What did you feel? Even if it was the most unintelligible scene or incomprehensible nonsense, tell me, please. I'd like to know.
Guidance. This is our four.

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5 Comments
  • ???

    this is beautiful.


    about 2 months ago
  • Chloe_Cat

    I love this. It made me think of warm summer nights, sitting under the stars and feeling at peace with the world around me. I felt content, floating, infinite. I think your words are beautiful.


    about 2 months ago
  • bunnybeige

    re: thank you.
    p.s. --> just know that while i don't like/comment on your pieces that often, i really like them.
    ~p.w.


    about 2 months ago
  • SittingByTheSea

    I thought of reaching the stars when I read this. Very good! These are really cool!


    about 2 months ago
  • onethousandburningeyes

    When I read this, it conjured up a scene in my mind of some sort of explorer on a ship, using the stars to find their way. It somewhat seemed like an engraving that would be printed in an old book, and I believe that may be due to the use of Roman numerals. I really liked this poem!


    about 2 months ago