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Message to Readers
It would be awesome if somebody would just give me honest feedback for my work, thanks!
I love this review's use of a quote and its inclusion of the book's theme! The description of the cliff-hangers and action in the story make me interested in learning more about the book.
I wish this review included specific reasons why you loved this book. These elements would solidify your opinion and better persuade readers to learn more about the book. I would encourage you to brainstorm some specific parts of the book you loved.
Please don't include spoilers in your review - they discourage people from reading the book you are writing about. Instead, try building suspense or introducing the main problem in your book. This will encourage others to read this book to find out what happens!
Adding your personal connection to this book would fully strengthen this book review. Try thinking about what stuck out to you personally about this book. Perhaps it was a character that reminded you of yourself or someone you know. Perhaps it contained a lesson/theme that resonated with your life or beliefs.
This is a great start for your book revoew, and you should be very proud. Putting some additional work into your writing is definitely work it! I am super excited to see how this piece turns out.
I hope this helps you take your book review to the next level! Make sure to revisit the competition guidelines if you have any questions. It was a joy reviewing your work!