Cosmogyral

United States

and i am tired,
so very tired.

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

January 11, 2021

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THIS IS A COLLECTION OF POEMS UNDER A SINGLE TITLE.



LXXVIII. one day i will defiantly raise my chin,
and tell you to stay out of my life.
            there is no master of destiny,
but i will be the mast of my stars.


What did you think when you read that? What did you feel? Even if it was the most unintelligible scene or incomprehensible nonsense, tell me, please. I'd like to know.

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7 Comments
  • Rose A

    hmm... I never know what I think when I read your poems besides the fact that I am awestruck. Then I go back and visualize it. I see someone sitting on the edge of a boat as it makes its way through a river that reflects the infinite stars. their hair blows behind them as they raise their face to the sky and smile.


    about 1 month ago
  • Ibex

    I honestly love how many poems you've made with stars. This is a pretty cool series. I ought to go back and read them all...

    Re: Yes, I love golden eagles! My mom and I see a lot of bald eagles around our house, so they were definitely pretty central to that poem, but we've seen golden eagles too and they're GORGEOUS. There's a scene with a golden eagle in Planet Earth 2 that's pretty awesome; that's probably why I love them so much. They're such majestic birds.


    about 1 month ago
  • Jj101

    Wow this is amazing.
    Re: Yeah, that's true.


    about 1 month ago
  • Lata.B

    This is great!!


    about 1 month ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    Love it!!


    about 1 month ago
  • Paisley Blue

    wow, love this... wow. <3


    about 1 month ago
  • Cosmogyral

    the good moments.


    about 1 month ago