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It is brief but has lots of emotions and meanings in it. I like the thing you said "as if gravity never hurt you." It's very pretty.
I think the briefness makes the effect of this piece, so I don't think there's something you need to add. It's beautiful in this way.
For the answer to your question, it made me feel lost. I don't why actually, this piece suppose to give me hope. But I think it is because I realized my dreams (the stars I chase) are lightyears away and I won't be able to reach them. But don't think this is a bad comment. I love your writing!! It was well-written; keep going:)