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hello. it's been a while, but i'm back.
Loved the second paragraph when you talked about 'what is man.' These philosophical questions were written so beautifully.
The overall concept of speaking to or about God and asking these mortal questions in and of its self was deepening. I'd like to know how else he's poetry is better than yours and how you can express that to your reader. (but I really do love the opening language, 'hemmed in the oceans' in such a wonderful line)
Watch for capitalization and punctuation! I'll have to check out the chapters you've recommended as well I'm very intrigued :)