Cosmogyral

United States

i never wanted aottsisfts to be romantic

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

January 9, 2021

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LXXVI. the greatest conquest,
to steal the stars when they become your difficulties,
what a grand ending.



What did you think when you read that? What did you feel? Even if it was the most unintelligible scene or incomprehensible nonsense, tell me, please. I'd like to know.
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7 Comments
  • Dmoral

    cosmogyral, honey, this just proves i need to catch up on your work.
    this is amazing, as always.
    now to skip around your pieces and read some, before i'm dethroned from the head of your fan club. ;)


    about 2 months ago
  • Madelyn (Carolina Girl)

    I really liked this. It made me feel victory for some reason. Like stealing something bright when you are at your darkest.


    about 2 months ago
  • SittingByTheSea

    Love it!!!


    about 2 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    Re: nicely put :) i love it


    about 2 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    dude i loved this. i thought of a warrior, standing on a battlefield covered in starlight, standing proud among the wreckage. idk. i'm not sure if you mean this to be hopeful or despairing, but i got a lot of mixed feelings from this... :) beautiful as ever <3


    about 2 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    replying:thank you<3


    about 2 months ago
  • mindfruit

    hmm, interesting piece! when I read this, a part of me was thinking about conquering your demons, basically? I dunno. or maybe accepting that getting rid of certain things in life that are really beautiful (like relationships) is the best path? whether I got it right or not lol, fantastic writing as always.


    about 2 months ago