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Why choose God?
The points here are great! This is a huge need for Christians to write pieces like this.
You might want to expand on some things, especially relating to miracles. I don't know how you "classify" yourself but It's a little bit Pentecostal (no offense if you consider yourself so). I wouldn't use miracles as an example because it's pretty close to prosperity theology.