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Message to Readers
I know, I'm a procrastinator. Let me know what you think!
You describe the heartbreak you felt while reading very well, and as somebody who loves depressing stories, that made me want to read it.
I think the part about the points of views changing and the momentum dying isn't needed. The point of the review is to boost the book. Maybe include that but point out a positive aspect of the POV's.
Because you speak about the movements of today at the beginning, and it seems like a strong theme then, you should circle back to it towards the end to make it more cohesive.
You are very convincing, and I love how you relate this book to the issues at hand.
Maybe use some synonyms for "refugee," and "refuge." Great Job! I really enjoyed reading your review and would appreciate if you could take a look at mine. Have a lovely day ;)