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The author of the review did a good job on writing a brief summary with enough information for the reader to know the plot. The way she described her feelings towards the book, and sometimes with specific examples, makes me want to rush to the nearest bookstore.
I think you should spend less time talking about how the switch in perspective is confusing because you're trying to encourage your readers to read the book in your review.
To make this review stronger, you could connect some of the quotes you used into your review. Maybe its just me, but it's kind of difficult to see the relationship between them.
Your review is really good overall, with great vocabulary and descriptions. With just a few tweaks, it could be even better!
I like how you connected the plot(s) of the book to a current event! - that emphasizes the meaning and impact