Cosmogyral

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i never wanted aottsisfts to be romantic

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

January 5, 2021

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THIS IS A COLLECTION OF SHORT POEMS UNDER A SINGLE TITLE



LXXII. my stars i breathe your life,
yet you do not shine for me.
          and i cannot find the words



What did you think when you read that? What did you feel? Even if it was the most unintelligible scene or incomprehensible nonsense, tell me, please. I'd like to know
discontent

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4 Comments
  • Maya'sTired

    A familiar toxic relationship that leaves you depleted


    about 2 months ago
  • abby.a

    i cannot find the words to describe the feelings your writing brings me. but know that it's always a joy to read your words.


    about 2 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    goodness this is brilliant... the footnotes add a lot to it. i love, like you said, the discontent feeling of this piece, the under-the-surface unease. it's perfect :)
    this series is absolutely stunning! like Kiwibird said, congrats on your 100th piece!!!


    about 2 months ago
  • psithurism #words [Sunnydew]

    Congrats on your 100th published piece!


    about 2 months ago