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haven't written anything good lately, but i kinda like this piece so there you go :) hope you like it as well, what's your fav verse/stanza?
This piece was very well written I love it! It has a bittersweet tone to it and honestly you write wonderfully well! I adore the lines "where the wind knows our names and the trees were witnesses of our love" this piece is amazing wow i love it!
what influenced this piece?
Theres nothing to add this piece was masterfully done good job! don't stop writing and keep going you have talent!