Fabiana250

Peru

she/her

Message to Readers

haven't written anything good lately, but i kinda like this piece so there you go :) hope you like it as well, what's your fav verse/stanza?

one last favour

January 13, 2021

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why don't we go back
to the place where everything began
where the wind knows our names
and the trees were witnesses of our love

come with me
let's sit by the river
let the water take 
all our issues away

i wouldn't be asking you for this
if the rain would cooperate
and fall once and for all

because this flame in my chest
keeps growing 
even though our story is long over
my love for you doesn't fade

but now it's their happy season
and clouds don't feel like crying
so maybe reliving memories
will spark that flame in you again
 


 

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4 Comments

  • Odysseus

    I'm going to cry, this is so lovely


    7 months ago

  • julia.vasyakin

    This is amazingly written! its really amazing and honestly pulled at my heartstrings. Well done!!


    7 months ago

  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    This is masterfully written. Wow. My fav line is “where the wind knows our names“ Wow.


    7 months ago

  • AJ - Izzy

    ah, this tugged at my heartstrings... this is beautiful, and so incredibly sweet. I love the line, "where the wind knows our names/and the trees were witnesses of our love"... this honestly reminds me a lot of some of my memories. Amazing writing <3 <3


    7 months ago