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the world is wide enough
Just a rough first draft, this was written after an upsetting day for me - it made me feel somewhat better but not yet, so we shall see. The title is very depressing, I suppose, but I think that is the feeling that the poem seeks to address. Nonetheless, I remain open to any and all sorts of suggestions!
I think towards the end it seems too optimistic and too forced (and two are two too many cliched statements haha), what do you think? Any feedback is welcomed :-)
Written By: yapyapxy
September 23, 2016