Rohan’s Defender

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*joined in July 2020*

Message to Readers

You are important and loved! Each and EVERY one of you! Have a great day!

HAPPY NEW YEAR’S EVE!!! Or if it’s New Year’s where you are, then HAPPY 2021!!!

Their Bond Can Still Save Them

December 31, 2020


dreams know you well now
and whispers in the starlit fields 
characterize your gentle nature
i ask for just a moment
one to know your secrets
with you, reality is set
spinning, spinning, spinning, spinning

on the ground
my head is higher 
than the shimmering silver stars
in the chill eve of night, my heart
stays warm, with radiating heat like a flame
like a flame

how can tears be shared by two?
even when they tell not of them
to the other, yet a 
connection of the salty liquid’s purpose 
remains the same
the same

words spill so easily between them
a bittersweet bond has formed with these two
wrapping around their wrists like ivy
their heartbeats are no longer steady,
the thumping of each has merged into a 
song of high, low, double, fast, slow,
beating as a new melody,
a rhythm completely in sync
and it makes a song in each heart
each heart

each voice, though separated by many
others in a world of noise
still makes its way upward 
rising like a lantern above the rest
two voices meet high in the heavens
linking into a bright, yet feather-soft
chain that silences the other sound
leaving only these two
these two

two beings living in this illusion
this wonder
they stay here until someone
flips the switch
and gravity send them crashing down

they try to stand, together 
but the quicksand laps at their feet
dragging them under
the only thing they can control
are their joined hands
but even that is soon ripped apart,
for this hard world envies their bond
their bond

if each can be strong
oh-so-painfully strong
enough to hold their breath
and wait out the darkness
and silence
then at last, the two will meet again
meet again

they laugh and cry 
because they fought the cold
clutches of the world and
they pulled through it together 

these two are rare
for they have what it takes
the resolve to get through 

and in this world
that is the only way


*me* Hi! So, this is different from my usual style...

*my brain* um, not really. All you ever write anymore are romance poems. And it’s all because-

*me* SHHH! Quit talking about me!

*brain* whatever. 

Anyway, as I was saying, this is different from my usual style, *pointed look at brain*. But I hope you enjoy. And the lowercase was intentional.

*brain* Yeah, I think they get that.

 *me* Happy New Year’s Eve Eve!! Have an amazing day, and know you are all loved! I’m gonna go have a little talk with my brain...... 


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  • FantasyOtter12

    Re: Thats funny nobody else has compared me to keefe XD
    I guess my online persona here does fit his personality fairly well though.. thanks for all the comments :D

    4 months ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    a-d-o-r-a-b-l-e pfp btw... just wanted to say happy new years eve, i haven't been around as much these past 3 days :)
    I also just saw (one of your many) comments on mindfruits piece XD - which character reminds you of mindfruit and i? Hope you're doing well :D

    4 months ago
  • Halopoet

    re: thankyou eden. The world needs more people like you.

    4 months ago
  • Halopoet

    Re: thankss it’s cool right? Also, I think I’ll be okay like this I always have my wtw fam to escape to.

    4 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    ahh this is so beautiful<3

    4 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: no unfortunately they're my sister's XD the big huge fluffy one is Draco (he's a big teddy bear) and the other is Jax who scares me XD

    4 months ago
  • barelybear

    Oh 5 phew haha
    It’s lucky I really love writing reviews
    Well I am officially excited now I mean this term’s CA were super cool. Good luck! I hope to see you around more and have a great day :)

    4 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: I've only written like threeeeee.....

    4 months ago
  • barelybear

    Re: OMG! That’s so cool! Yea I’ve been asking about and I think I’m going to apply. I know you would make an excellent CA, and I hope I will be able to share the term with you. It’s good to know that a friend will apply too :)

    Also do you know how many reviews I need to have written? I should probably crack on...

    4 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    well I was planning on applying (we could both be CA!) but I must now rush and write reviews. XD
    Not much! I want to invite some KOTLC and HP obsessed friends over to dinner (I got a HP cookbook) and have yet to get my moms attention... yeah lol. but not much going on here!

    4 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: ahahahahaha at this point you're going to have to explain to your family that you aren't crazy XD tell Zi I said hi!
    *waves furiously"*
    How're you doing? what have I missed? *taps mic* WHAT'S THE TEA XD

    4 months ago
  • Madelyn (Carolina Girl)

    Re:Yes! I wanted to encourage that other writer :) No one is too far gone. Plus I specialize in reality lol

    4 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: hahahahah you did? I'm still going to be in and out--but needed some encouragement so logged back in:)

    4 months ago
  • Madelyn (Carolina Girl)

    I wrote a poem in response to the piece by that lovely writer who wrote about them feeling like a bad person. Please check it out and let us blow it up so we can encourage them

    4 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    this. this. this be MAGICCCCCCCCCCC

    4 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Thank you!
    Yep, for sure. I'm glad you like it too. Have a great day!

    4 months ago
  • crystalline•galaxies

    re: well, thank you as well! your comment was so kind.
    also, wow, this piece might be one of my favorites of yours...

    4 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Wow, this is one of my favorites of your romance pieces! My favorite line is that opener. It's such an intriguing and unique hook.

    4 months ago
  • JonesyL123

    These are seriously beautiful words Eden! I love how you told a story still using poetry. Keep writing :)

    4 months ago
  • Halopoet

    Re: awww i like the nickname though you can always just call me laurie I would like that. Yeah im, I’ll be okay soon. I’d love to talk to you.

    4 months ago