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This piece made me think. The writer used amazing metaphors that give us an insight into the narrator's inner and deeper thinking and feelings. I adore the questions the writer proposes to the reader and the real (un)conclusion of these thoughts.
I would love to see these intriguing thoughts being more approached and the piece to be longer. I loved this work and writing and love to know more!
I love your writing! The rhythm is soothing and invites the reader to continue reading. I also liked the central idea and the rare thinking about this Christmas time. Congratulations!