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Sweet and Sour

December 20, 2020

PROMPT: The Drabble

    A scientist motioned to the candy in front of Aya.
    "It's called Sweet-n-Sour. Eat it."
    Like she had a choice.
    Aya placed it on her tongue and the fires of Sheol were unleashed on her tongue. Sourness clawed into every taste bud, ripping away her senses.
    The Sweet was worse. It was like being kissed by a snake, sugar-sweet venom coating her mouth and deriving her of her senses, her humanity.
    She was barely aware of her body, of her keening and wailing and moaning.
    The flavor turned to numbness. Her body stilled. Aya should've been relieved.
    "Give me more."
I wrote this story like in the sixth grade... it kinda reminds me of that one part in This Book is Not Good For You when they eat the chocolate and it brainwashes them or sumthin. Anyway, thanks for reading!


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  • Ree Sethu

    wow! nice work!

    7 months ago
  • løne wølf

    this is marvelous!! your imagery is-- YES *chef's kiss*, and i especially love the line, "It was like being kissed by a snake, sugar-sweet venom coating her mouth and deriving her of her senses, her humanity." amazing job!! <33

    7 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    Hurry up! Christmas is upon us and you as an elf have to make sure the presents are up to code. Head to your work station!

    7 months ago
  • serein

    oh this is so cool! your descriptions are wonderful--you made me think about it differently!

    7 months ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    ahh, the descriptions!!!

    7 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: THANK YOU, ANSON!!! That means a lot to me! I’m so excited for you to read it! I’ve really missed posting after my fanfic was over.

    7 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Woah.... now I’m kinda scared to eat candy. XD This is really good! The sweet part descriptions are amazing! Great work!

    7 months ago