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Observations in a Walmart Parking Lot (Please Read!!)

December 17, 2020


Three men in a pickup truck the color 
of a tired hero's white horse.
A faded orange ladder strapped to the back
that used to be the color of a dreamsicle.
And their colors are faded
but their smiles are vibrant as they dance in a beat-up car to a bad song on a too-loud radio.
My mom and sister ditched me in the car- they left me stranded in a walmart parking lot- and let me tell you, it was the best part of my entire day. I was people watching and it was just like bing biong bing bing there's a poem there!!! and I was going crazy trying to remember every lil thing that popped into my head and. (I had to end that run-on sentence XD) Basically, I'm trying to do the "write what you know" thing, and talk about my own experiences + observations. So here's what I saw in a walmart parking lot :)

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  • Nikki

    wow! this is such a cute piece! i totally support the writing about observations, cuz it mostly turns out to be like a painting (like yours :)

    7 months ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    Woah, it's only a week till Christmas, so you start decorating. You start to hang ornaments, with music playing in the background. Suddenly, an ad comes up, "Are you looking for Chapter 8? Then click on the link to find out more!"

    8 months ago
  • Rose A(hiatus)

    re: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

    8 months ago
  • AstroWriter

    Re: Oh! I didn't even mean to rhyme xD

    8 months ago
  • AstroWriter

    Ahhhhhhh a walmart poem! :)

    8 months ago
  • sci-Fi

    ha I love this idea! great job!

    8 months ago
  • Rose A(hiatus)

    Walmart has some very interesting people. I love how you turned them into such a unique and awesome poem.

    8 months ago
  • Sunflower~

    I love this piece! You did such a good job! I people-watch too, and I try to write about it but it's never interesting lol... My favorite line was the one about the ladder looking like a dreamsicle ;) I love the style of your descriptions, they are so bright and colorful!

    8 months ago
  • | rosi willard |

    I can say with certainty that walmart is the most interesting place to go if you want to people-watch.

    8 months ago