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Finally wrote a poem that I actually like! Thank you to Paisley Blue for the great advice on line breaks, and Anne Blackwood for the amazing poetry recommendations!
The emotion in the repetition of "don't you dare" along with the similes about love and catching and all that are really good and it flows really well with the rest of the poem.
I wish I knew where you get you're inspiration. The flow of the poem is really well done along with the line breaks, i didn't quite understand the line breaks at first but by the end it didn't matter to me at all.
This is beautifully done, the emotion really stands out and I loved reading it. You should be really proud of yourself.