AstroWriter

United States

I write for myself and share pieces for you to enjoy as well!
ENFJ
Hardworking • Funny • Nice • Sarcastic • Curious
She/Her
Am a writer to advocate and entertain
<3
*ASTRONOMER IN WORKS*

Message to Readers

rip masa

Dedicated to Masa

January 29, 2021

FREE WRITING

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Oh I'm in pain
I'm still here
Calling out your name

You can put me in the grave
But you can always remember
I was brave

I was strong and bold
It kept me alive in
the harshness of the cold

I got out of the fear
You where nothing
but a tear

I'm just a untold tale
Like many
A win not a fail

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14 Comments
  • JonesyL123

    Wow, this is beautiful!


    4 months ago
  • | rosi willard |

    ..this is a beautiful piece, but if you don't mind, who is Masa?


    5 months ago
  • Zirong

    awww this is amazing, especially the last two stanzas!


    5 months ago
  • cloudi

    re: again haha anyway, yeah i can call at lunch


    5 months ago
  • Molly_

    Re; haha I've just seen you looked at a few of my pieces- thank you. Like, so much. I honestly think that someone binge reading my writing is the pinnacle of all my success <3


    5 months ago
  • Molly_

    Re; thank you so much, that means a lot :)
    This piece is beautiful, it's so simple yet manages to encompass some sort of anguish and longing that the reader can't quite reach. It's fantastic!


    5 months ago
  • cloudi

    what a beautifully deep piece...
    re: thanks for the comment! 10 years? please <3 (ooh Hidden Feelings is good)


    5 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    re: like...giving your attributes to an inanimate object. personification is used a lot in writing to give a connection or paint a picture. i.e the shelf smiled under the weight of the books (that's a bad one but off the top of my head.
    by personifying yourself, its the opposite. what do you relate to? like, i might relate to a palette of paints. i am artsy, love colors, and grow from the experience of life (kinda like mixing colors together). dont feel like you have to use my "question" it is a weird one XD


    6 months ago
  • Madelyn (Carolina Girl)

    I love this. And its great to see you writing about others :)


    6 months ago
  • resident philocalist

    this is so amazing wtf i love it!! tysm for writing bout me! love your work and thanks for the support!


    6 months ago
  • Emi

    This is really such a good poem. It almost feels song like to me, something that someone would sing to herself to comfort herself.


    6 months ago
  • BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)

    You are awesome at poetry!!! :)
    Re: Thankyou!!! It is really aggressive :3 and I didn't realise it was going to be so vengeful until I got halfway through.


    6 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    Poetry! This is awesome!


    6 months ago
  • Lata.B

    "You where nothing
    but a tear"
    omg i love this poem!! Woah!


    6 months ago