pyrrhic

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pyrrhic;
to be victorious at a cost that outweighs the success
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any pronouns
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previously abby.a

Message from Writer

you're not alone. you're loved. you're worth it. you're beautiful. i promise.
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i’m paisley blue’s #1 fan
and yours, too, person reading this :]

star dust ballerina

December 16, 2020

FREE WRITING

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your steps were
in time with the moon
chest rising and
falling softly
arms flowing through
time itself
your hips swayed
between the stars
every movement flawless

i can't avert my
eyes from your dance
you lure me
closer and closer
but faster then
i can blink
you halt in
your movements

when you stop
i want to wail
scream at you to
begin the dance again
i want to stomp my feet
and flail my arms
and order you
to dance for me

but i sit still
and wait
eyes wide
and you smile
and dance 
 
what is this? what? WHAT? i am almost ashamed. but i must admit, the opportunity to grow is too overwhelming for me to ignore. so please, PLEASE, tell me what i can do better :)

i hope everyone is safe and well. you're all appreciated! <3

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6 Comments
  • lochnessie

    oooo i really love this
    and re: thank you *blushes* hehe


    5 months ago
  • mirkat

    "your steps were
    in time with the moon"
    after reading the first line i was enraptured... and the title of the piece and the emotion! i love this! do not be ashamed! this was amazing...
    <3<3<3


    5 months ago
  • Rose A(hiatus)

    I'm jealous of your talent! This was completely awesome. It's gorgeous and well written. The beauty of this piece is obvious, so don't be ashamed.


    5 months ago
  • dee’s abditory

    my dear you are the most inFURIATING PERSON EVER QUIT BEING BETTER THAN ME STOP IT GO WRITE A LIMERICK OR SOMETHING


    5 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    ahh this is so beautiful. the imagery is so magical. dont be ashamed or downplay your writing.
    also what a pretty title,i love it!:)


    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    dUDE I LOVE IT OMG
    :D
    your poetry is just amazing !!!


    5 months ago