SunV

India

she/her

home is wherever i'm with you.

est. 11/10/19

Message to Readers

So, turns out you can't add anything related to competitions in the footnotes either. That's completely fine. I'm really happy with how this turned out, so I'm republishing it as a normal piece, inspired by Batman_is_a_cracker's Sonnet.

leaving you behind (Republish (Check message box))

December 20, 2020

FREE WRITING

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i can't cry
it isn't in me anymore to do so
i have wasted all my tears on you
what more do you want me to do?

you left far too soon
and i want to erase all the memories i have of you
i want to change the now and forget the before
i don't want to remember you anymore

the world moves on
but it feels like i'm stuck in limbo
how can i put one foot in front of me
how can i create new memories?

i can't even start to erase you for my mind
for i know, if i do, i'm leaving you behind
 
rhyme scheme: abccdeffghiijj

lowercase intentional

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6 Comments
  • sci-Fi

    this is so amazing. your raw emotion and the powerful ending... *chefs kiss*


    9 months ago
  • Starlitskies

    OMG! Your ending is so powerful! And I love how you've embellished your piece with raw emotion! <3
    Re: Thank you for your comments on both my pieces! God I'm so jealous that you're tall! About my name... I'd rather remain anonymous for now, but if I do decide to share my name I won't forget to let you know! :) As for the guessing, I don't think you'll get it but I'd love to see you try! XD (I asked Anne to guess as well.) So head over to one of my older pieces and have at it! Hahaha! Can't wait to see how this goes! :)


    9 months ago
  • Emi

    This is so emotional. I love how you can capture the feeling of being stuck in time when someone has lost a love.


    9 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    THIS IS SO GOOD
    HOW YOU DOING, SAANVI?


    9 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    This...... AMAZING! Wow! *claps*
    How are you, SunV?


    9 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: <3


    9 months ago