FantasyOtter12

United States

He/him
ISFJ-T
Scorpio
Love dystopian fiction!
Pianist
Bookworm
Abnegation
*Est. 7/6/20*
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Phlegmatic-Sanguine

Message to Readers

ayyyyyyyy macarena (i had to.)

AND ITS SHRIVELED - NOT SHRIVED... REEEE

New rhymes with soon. Whaaat :O

Everything Will Be Alright

December 15, 2020

FREE WRITING

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broken lampshades with shrived tissues on the floor
stupid raindrops - i don't care anymore

i'm ready to go 
but you drop on the floor cuz the world's about to blow...

roses on fire my eyes burn too

pretty petals that float from the sky,
confetti saying "everything will be alright"

but then you pick them up 

and they turn to ashes in your hand.

-Thank you for your time-

~FantasyOtter12

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21 Comments
  • Rose A(hiatus)

    wow. This is so amazing it kind of makes me want to cry. This piece(like pretty much all of your pieces) is fabulous.


    5 months ago
  • beth r.

    whoa
    this is good and i'm embarrassed at the lameness of my comment it's just this piece is too good to put into words.


    5 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: thank you, F’Otter!!!! :)


    5 months ago
  • ANSON REYNOLDS

    *blinks* *blinks again* *can muster no other reaction for this freaking fabulous poem other than blinking* *blinks an apology* *posts the comment before the blinking thing keep spiraling*


    5 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    Woah.... that's so....

    Sleigh bells ring, and horse hooves click. Your magical ride awaits! To chapter seven we go, over the hills and through the beautiful, fresh laid snow <3
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/208472/version/429630


    5 months ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    wow
    evidently that's my go to reaction for reading remarkable pieces.


    5 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Plus we can’t play music, lol


    5 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: oh, okay. That makes sense. I hear you about listening to songs over and over again........ tho I do have very versatile taste in music. I can listen to a Kpop song, then a country song, then a Disney song all in a row, XD. But thanks for explaining! :) It’s extremely hard to pick one favorite singer/band. Mine change almost constantly. Zion and I want to eventually record a song together (the only problem is that when I sing I sound like a dying animal).


    5 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    oh gosh. wow. imagery is amazing!


    5 months ago
  • Rachaelgrace

    Woahhhhhhhhhhh
    This is so good and so filled with imagery


    5 months ago
  • Jason_claire :)

    That last line, I don't know what is wrong with me, but I burst out laughing. Literally me trying to cheer myself up, "pretty petals float from the sky", "'everything will be alright'", and then mentally in a very flat blank cold voice "they turn into ashes in your hand" Okay I for real have issues that's not even funny, but the truth in that and all the times I cover up moments like this, it's no longer depressing, it's just very funny.
    replying- Aw, thank you :)


    5 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    re: hahaha half of it is you and half is.... we won't get into it...


    5 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    that's fine. Go ahead. Make me cry for the eighth time this week. Fine. Good work, sir.


    5 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Btw, your message of this poem (ayyyy macarena) is such a mood! XD


    5 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: okay! Well, you use it really well, I just wanted to make sure *lets out breath* thanks!


    5 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Woah...... this is stunning!!!!! ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE! Wait, CA doesn’t have more fires does it?!
    And yes, thank YOU for YOUR time! And on a slightly different note (in relation to your message for this poem) on my pieces, autocorrect and typos can be SO ANNOYING!
    Re: yesss, one day!


    5 months ago
  • mirkat

    thank you for yyyooouuuurrrr time, f'otter.
    <3<3<3


    5 months ago
  • AliMuscles04

    Love this!
    Side note: Macarena is one of my FAVORITE Christmas songs (yes, I do mean Christmas)


    5 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    ah this is really beautiful and holds alot of depth,one of my favourite of your pieces i think<3:)


    5 months ago
  • sci-Fi

    Just echoing Paisley-- gorgeous. Always love reading ur pieces


    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    Woah this is so profound and beautiful... I love your writing :) hope youre doing well, dear!


    5 months ago