Cosmogyral

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i never wanted aottsisfts to be romantic

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

December 10, 2020

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LXIII. the universe is not a place for wandering ghosts.
         it is simply desolate.


What did you think when you read that? What did you feel? Even if it was the most unintelligible scene or incomprehensible nonsense, tell me, please. I'd like to know.

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7 Comments
  • Dmoral

    as a proud member (and leader) of the Cosmogyral fan club, i say this highly---i adore this. my favorite part is the diction choice of "desolate" !


    3 months ago
  • bookmagic

    At first I was confused but then I thought that perhaps you are right.


    3 months ago
  • ???

    Woah


    3 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    I totally agree with what izzywidgeon said! This is beautiful <333


    3 months ago
  • bunnybeige

    Oooh. I didn't really know what to make of this, but I thought that you meant through this piece that the world is desolate for those who have no path, or haven't found a sense of purpose, thus they are "wandering ghosts"?
    It's so simple, but yet it could spark conversation for miles!
    Love your work, have been reading from the sidelines.

    Keep writing!


    3 months ago
  • Minvra

    Re: Re
    Sometimes digging up cringe pasts are better than letting it fade. I'm at decim, forty-eight stuff to go.


    3 months ago
  • Minvra

    Re: Glad you liked it. Good work needs comments and more likes. Emotions is like fiendfyre, eh? Still on the loose as the narrator turns away.


    3 months ago