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bro you dont know how much self control it took to not highlight every single line and write how gorgeous it is. this is a masterpiece, from the general aesthetic to each sentence to your word choice.
idk why this could be styllistic but there isn't any spaces between the periods?? its a bit wack to read but doesn't really detract from the piece in the end.
IVEE BEEN MEANING TO REVIEW THIS FOR AWHILE AND NOW I HAVE ENERGY for once in my short miserable life lol. but seriously this is one of my favorite pieces on here to this day dude keep up the excellent work!!