bookmagic

United States

INFJ
Christian
she/her/
I'm weird, deal with it
Is constantly stuck in her own fantasies
Kotlc, Land of Stories, League of Archers, Bookwanderers, etc...
Hello Book Club
Pen name: Skarlett Clarmont
I want to be a novelist

Message from Writer

"Each generation dumps their problems on the next because they simply don't have enough time to deal with them. I suspect that if they could see a bigger picture they would not destroy themselves and their planet the same way."
-Mr. Forkle/Shanon Messenger
I've got your back.
"I never really much cared for my heart, until I learned it kept me alive," --me
Scrap all the projects: fairy tale Fridays and that's it.

The new day (Review for Review because I love giving reviews, but I have no idea what to review.)

April 15, 2021

FREE WRITING

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Short of breath, heart of steel,
Anxious thoughts take over me,
Sadness lurks, all too real,
Happiness is hard to keep;

An arrow shot high o'er the trees,
Struck a dove and made her fall,
Painted red, a raging sea,
Collect her screech and useless calls;

Footsteps falling on the ground,
The crunch and crash of bush and brush,
Will never cease to make a sound,
And running, running through the marsh;

Heavy tune of primal cheers,
Beats within a heart of gold,
Must resist the wings of fear,
Even if I run alone;

Flame consumes the helpless trees,
Unseen nations devastated,
It's too late wipe it clean,
But it will be recreated;

One day of rest, of heart and song,
A glorious tune of light and joy,
Will travel through the happy throngs,
One day is closer than afar.

 
If you want, please send me a piece to review. I would also like a review on this piece. I'm thinking of entering it into my schools magazine.

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5 Comments
  • Ava Marie

    Re: thank you, her lines are the most fun to write


    5 months ago
  • Sophiascb

    re- haha thank you! You got a laugh out of me!
    Also leaving a review of this piece :) I'd love it if you reviewed the piece you commented on, baby clothes, or this piece https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/228664/version/483676 (they're kind of similar haha I have to decide which one I like better for a comp I'm submitting to, so if you could lmk ;)


    5 months ago
  • Nyla

    RE: Aww thank you so much! Also, this piece is really great- the rhyming scheme is awesome. If I can think of anything to critique I will definitely do a review but tbh, right now I can't think of anything. So, good job! :)


    5 months ago
  • kathryn siena

    re: thanks. it actually means a lot more coming from a stranger!


    5 months ago
  • kathryn siena

    I absolutley love this!!
    re: thanks. I get what you mean, but I don't think the person who that piece is about will, which sucks because she's my best friend.


    5 months ago