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The last paragraph was a different tone than the others in my eyes and I thought that the differing tone made it a really moving and well-written paragraph.
I wonder how different the poem would be if the author wrote it from the perspective of the dove or from the perspective of the tree that is in a burning forest.
Really good piece. Exceptional use of rhythm. Loved it. Keep up the fantastic work!